Segraece on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/segraece/art/The-land-of-dreams-623718264Segraece

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The design in this art piece is marvelous. I love the details you gave Luna and the dream world. I like the shading, the colors, and the background. However, if there is one thing I have to comment on is some of the symbols on Luna. I think there's a little too much going on. I like the constellation on her wing, but the loops and lines toward the end of her wing was a little too much. I think if you would've cut down on the number of symbols, it'll be great. Besides that, I think you did a great job.